Directions: Identify ten corrections that must be made to this paragraph:
In the united States, if you hear someone talking about The King," their probably talking about Elvis. Elvis Presley was known as the King of Rock-andRoll. He was born on January 8, 1935 Growing up, Elvis was shy, but he love to sing and play geetar. He sang in public for the first time and got his first guitar when he was ten. When Elvis was in eighth grade, his family moved to Memphis, Tennessee. Elvis got to learn a lot more about music and meet people in the music business. Eventually, he got a record deal and become famous. Some of Elvis most popular songs were "Heartbreak Hotel, "Jailhouse Rock”, and "Blue Suede Shoes”.
Then, answer the following questions about your Unit 2 Essay. Questions 1-3 will require you to think specifically about your performance on this quarter's essay. Questions 4-6 will require you to compare your performance on the Unit 1 Essay and the Unit 2 Essay.
1) How do you feel about your performance on the essay?
2) Which assignment helped you the most? Why?
3) Which assignment helped you the least? Why?
4) What is something you understand better after this essay? Why?
5) What is something you still have questions about after this essay? Why?
6) In what ways has your writing improved with this essay? Why?
In the united States, if you hear someone talking about The King," their probably talking about Elvis. Elvis Presley was known as the King of Rock-andRoll. He was born on January 8, 1935 Growing up, Elvis was shy, but he love to sing and play geetar. He sang in public for the first time and got his first guitar when he was ten. When Elvis was in eighth grade, his family moved to Memphis, Tennessee. Elvis got to learn a lot more about music and meet people in the music business. Eventually, he got a record deal and become famous. Some of Elvis most popular songs were "Heartbreak Hotel, "Jailhouse Rock”, and "Blue Suede Shoes”.
Then, answer the following questions about your Unit 2 Essay. Questions 1-3 will require you to think specifically about your performance on this quarter's essay. Questions 4-6 will require you to compare your performance on the Unit 1 Essay and the Unit 2 Essay.
1) How do you feel about your performance on the essay?
2) Which assignment helped you the most? Why?
3) Which assignment helped you the least? Why?
4) What is something you understand better after this essay? Why?
5) What is something you still have questions about after this essay? Why?
6) In what ways has your writing improved with this essay? Why?